by Explorer222
Please keep the story going. One of the best I have read if not the best.
More stories please. The characters development and story is well written and quite interesting.
This isn't usually my genre choice, but it's excellent. The mastery without severe pain is enticing, & I'd venture is a turn-on to other mature males whose partners have declined such experimentation over the years.
HELL YES! We want another chapter. And another. And another.
More please, got me so horny I had to play!!
You earned a "5" in my opinion for the level of detail and the creativity. You are a very good writer. Thanks for sharing.
... you flounced on your story after promising more if you received more comments. How disappointing is that???
It's beautiful and eloquent. Easy to put one's self in the story and lose yourself. I found myself breathless with anticipation. Just lovely, thank you. If only such attention from an older male could be had. Sigh.
I really liked the 1st chapter, but this chapter was so Great that is was too short. More Please!
Good one! I enjoyed the characterizations with their fun twists. I have to say I would love to learn of more of their activities as they expand their relationship.
Great detailing, even down to the texture of the wooden spoon skimming across her bare ass. She has not even got down to the fine art of encouraging him to ejaculate in her mouth. And can she cook? I mean in the kitchen? Hopefully more than just box lunches, but those offer tremendous flavors as well. There are many opportunities for more erotic conflict and continuation. How long will this Sugar Pie last? Does she have any Finnish sex customs to introduce? Fucking in the sauna with birch twig whipping? James must have a sauna somewhere in his luxurous mansion? Please make an effore for more chapters. Thanks for sharing.
WOW! I loved it. Want another chapter? Of course! I want a whole series. I am 68 and have a flirtatious relationship with a 30 year old bikini barista. I have fantasized about her for quite some time. This was a wonderful story that encapsuled one of my own fantasies about her. Please keep writing this storyline. DWH