All Comments on 'Illithid's Tale Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading your story. Brings me back to playing Role Playing Games and hoping my character would get captured! Look forward to seeing more of this story and learning how the Half Elf Bard is able to resist the Mind Flayers psionics/magics.

Not that it isn't a well-written story... Just it A) ended too soon; B) I dislike traitorous individuals ending up with the upper-hand; and C) you've left me with the feeling there's not much hope for her - while that doesn't make for a bad story per se, I've enjoyed the way your stories SORT of work out...

What can I say, you've been typecasted by yourself...

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