All Comments on 'Captured by Faith'

What needs to happen in the next part, is she needs to force fem him. Hope you take a walk down that road. This is very good.

To short though. I hope there is a part two? Also, just a suggestion but please don't Fem him...I feel like that would kinda ruin his character.

This was an opening paragraph.

this story started with such promise and then it just ended abruptly. Did your wife or lover walk in while you were writing this. Needs lots of work