All Comments on 'It's Still Lingering on My Tongue'

some imperfections but still pumps emotion from the reader. Whether Old English adds or subtracts is a question, I'd strike it and stay modern. (example-

"doth start race", "does lift and she does" ) but the lines

"And I laugh

And I giggle

Cause that's this woman's fine riddle

It's no g-spot

But I found her little weakness" are lovely lines, as is the title.