All Comments on 'Fitness Model Moms Ch. 02'

It would be better if you developed the scenes and characters more. It's all rushed.

But it's pretty funny too, and comedy is hard to write so kudos.

but chapter 1 ran 11 chapters... so this wasn't really chapter 2, but chapter 12...

when chapter 3 comes out (which it must, considering 4 is mentioned) i risk not reading because i'll think 'oh, i already read 1-20'

then again, if that's all i have to complain about...

happy new year

RogueAlan

get that black cock! oh but wait! her slutty ways got her in the end....it backfired. gonna have her kid's kid now.

looking forward to that part.

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yeahhh sploodge!!!!!!!!!!!! squirting cum all over the place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Since I like both incest and interracial stories, this story was a rel treat. I loved the idea of Amy wanting to have a black baby but the surprise ending definitely made up for her not getting bred black. Keep writing.

this was not nearly as good as the first one. it was like some cartoon with all the lame sexual scenarios. only two were of any interest. monica never brought anything of worth to the story and amy ending although hilariously fitting lacked any real closure or any reason for empathy. you should have come up with a different concept or just stuck with the characters from chapter one and continued their story.

Should have not been titled CH 2 or 3. Was looking forward to the characters from CH 1. Liked them better.

If I was the son, I would look for another mother or pretend I did not have one.