by ThoughtfulTom
I was in no way part of this story. When you say you, you imply me. Im strictly hetro.
very well written if a bit flowery.one can feel the bodies and emotions as the author takes us on an exciting adventure
Thank you Tom for immortalising those wonderful times we had together. That really was exactly how I remember it. Thank you.
Cat xx
...description and detail in words to explain the coupling in every sense. Amazingly well done. 5.
I read your two other stories first, and while awaiting chapter 3, found this one very special. I hope you keep sharing your writing on a frequent basis. On the subject of incest, mother/sons are excellent, father/daughter encounters a bit edgy for me, but brother/sister are the most exiliarating since the have the potential of lasting a lifetime.
I have admit "Morning Light" by an other author was what got me hooked on incest. The first two chapters were very real, though the latter four chapters got a bit out of hand. Hopefully your later chapters of mother and son will stay believable.
I encourage you to consider a next chapter of Cat and Tom. If I could have given you a 6, I would have done so. Now it is time to locate Cat's submissions on this site.
I trust that this story meant as much to you as the actual experience meant to Tom, I thoroughly enjoyed this experience and buildup, congratulations on writing so well
Everything about it screamed at me that it was not just a one-off encounter. It felt like falling in love, the descriptions of the intimate moments so wonderfully, erotically written. Please keep writing!! I can't wait to read more!!