All Comments on 'New and Improved Wife'

What a very well-written, intriguing and erotic tale! Good use of grammar, punctuation, spelling and syntax all make your work enjoyable to read. The unique house party plot twist made a nice variation on a familiar theme of the reluctant wife. All very well done, with some hot erotica to boot. Clearly a five star effort!

Excellent writing, compelling storyline. xoxoxoxoxo Annette

Superb piece of writing. Really hot from start to finish with the highlight fucking the young blonde while watching your wife get fucked. 5 stars.

I'm just curious: Does anyone else get the impression that Dave may turn out to be a nuisance as far as Linda's nameless Hubby is concerned. I'm sure she will be quite happy to see Dave, but will her Hubby? Just curious...

I still don't get a husband letting his wife fuck another man even if she returned the favour at such a party, still think it is the quickest to a divorce.

Everyone likes a new and improved wife.