All Comments on 'From Humble Beginnings'

Trite, Trite, TRITE! This was really not very good. The writing was ok, but the story was too old and too recycled. It needed some kind of different angle. No need to continue on this line. Best to start again.

I enjoyed your story and am looking forward to more. Readers must suspend disbelief to enjoy a story, not look for similarities with others. Also, I like your character very much. Thank you.