by Jessie92
you show a lot of promise in your writing well done will be waiting for further adventures of mi,mi; and trig. Keep; on trucking tenbears43
Liked the descriptions of the first penetration. Not too cliché, and it seemed real.
Accidentally clicked on "1." Intended to give it a "5."
I especially enjoy women making their feelings and desires known...
And doing them! :+)))