All Comments on 'All Mine Ch. 05: My Favorite'

Please keep this going!! It's a really good balance between sex and storyline!! I love it!

I can't wait for the next part, the only thing I did not really like was Anne blindfolding Melinda, I though that should have been left out, but all in all it was a good story

I like your writing style and the characters are very interesting, as is the relationship. This is a good series. Looking forward to more chapters! One editing note: one "pedals" a bicycle. Flowers and vaginas have "petals". : )

I like the story development. The new character adds a new dimension with possibilities. I wish the chapters were a little longer. I'll be waiting for the next installment.

Your pacing is just perfect. Keep writing!

Good build up and starting to become a couple. Next chapter should make a big difference in there life's

I hope there will be more! This is a great story!

Please tell me there's going to be more and you haven't forgotten.

So love this! Can I have some more, please ...

Gotta love a story that starts with what's essentially sexual assault. Not.

Anonymous complainer. You read all 5 chapters. Had to make sure they all sucked?

Very interesting characters. Nice job.