All Comments on 'Help With Math'

Wham Bam TYM. ~~ it started -- it finish in 3 minutes or less.! WOW..!**

That folks was a real quick-e..LOL

Of a young girl who knows what she wants and takes steps to achieve it.

But our young lady here went from uncertain to being in control with no intervening steps of emotional progression. As the previous anonymous comment noted; it was start to finish in three minutes. A bit more of the in-between thoughts and actions would have helped make a better story.

Lue

a stretch at best...obviously an immature writer...lots to learn. quit reading quickly