All Comments on 'Private Compartment Ch. 05'

You are obviously an older railway enthusiast like myself as you have revived the ambiance of the old non-compartment stock so well. A beautifully crafted story. I really enjoyed it

And a great ending. Well written characters. Thank you.

I had to re-read chapter 04 to refresh a few points. I found myself writing a sequel in my mind awaiting each new chapter. I certainly hoped Paul would get to join with Ann in the most complete way. I even fantasized she would be very "fruity", though I used another word! To use Paul's favorite adjective, what a Lovely short story. Your writing is so good, I wish I could buy your stories as an eBook to keep handy on my iPad. It is rather time consuming to paste individual chapters into one PDF. In any case, I will commence reading more of your works. Cheers.

You've done it again. Just wonderful.

I can see and hear each of the characters in the series. Ann is so sincere and willing. Paul is so fortunate to have found them. And what a nice ending. Tied the bow just so.

Thank you for the time and effort.

I keep hoping for a chapter 06 to help fulfill some of the desires of Paul's fantasizes. Ann is such a darling to share and grow in her sexuality with Paul's participation and Bill's encouragement. She is a rare jewel.

A long life time to not fine some love of his own. Thats how life works good friends then time and distance do what they will. Memories are powerful what are the chances of Bill and Ann comming in that door.

A most enjoyable ride Thanks

I have loved reading these excellent stories..well constructed. A

The story goes on ?