All Comments on 'Jocks of the South Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Threesome

Well, once Francis calms down they can share... bet Nick would be happy with the two hunks :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What!!

No! More, please?? Now!!!!

ale84ale84almost 8 years ago
possessive much

I loved it francis so wants to own him

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ughh!!!

cliffhanger!!!! its okay, as long as we don't have to wait too long! im surprised the story turned out the way it did, because it seems like nick is having major doubts about matt. i was always team francis but now im liking the way things are going even more. but i agree with the past commenters, is it possible to see a 3way before matt goes back to school? love the story and keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Its good keep it up hope we don't have to wait to long

geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 8 years ago

Since both of them see him as a fucktoy, I want Nick to put himself first for a change. Stand up for himself. I know he probably won't, tho, since he doesn't want to give up the dick ...

chrisunderchrisunderalmost 8 years ago
aarrrrggggghhhh cliffhanger!!

dammmnnn the ending got me excited for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
so much YES

I get so excited whenever I see a new installment. I love that you keep adding perfect shock value every chapter yet everything flows so well. Also, LOVE the cliffhanger.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

HOT STORY. Keep it coming. Nick should take better care of himself, we know the consequences of unsafe sex. Although hot, let him be more responsible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Oh snap! The inevitable brother showdown! What will happen? Who will win?! Cannot wait for the next chapter

It seems as though Francis and Matt have switched personalities

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
finally! thanks

i was waiting for a new chapter for a while, im glad you added this. i dont like cliffhangers but this one was very interesting and i am excited to see what happens next. i really like this story and hope that nick is able to make a choice between the two brothers, it's difficult for me to choose a side! love the writing and the story, keep it up, Scott

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Can't wait for the next part. This is so HOT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Matt vs Francis!

Haha, ya!! It's a showdown. Keep it up.

FreeFaller93FreeFaller93almost 8 years ago
Nooooo!!!

It can't end here!! Oh my goodness was that hot or what?! Love, love, LOVE how this story is building up. Phew! It's definitely getting hot now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Never apologize for a cliffhanger.

Thanks for the fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
please upload number 6!

when are going to upload the new one?! im so excited for what's going to happen and im desperate for more! this is a great series, and i think you're a great writer. i hope nick chooses francis because francis was going to ask nick on a date before matt was, and i think francis is developing feelings for nick. matt hasn't made any hints about how he feels about nick. anyway, great job dude!

Hutchison12Hutchison12about 6 years ago
Wow

I’m loving the story. I’m not sure what’s happening with Matt and I feel Francis is falling for Nick, I hope they go the distance. Thanks for sharing this with us, have a fantastic day

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Matt vs Francis

I’m not sure why Matt’s complete personality changed I this chapter. Seems his charm and respectful care of Nick was a big hit with readers in Ch 3 but then it all changed. Sure he still kissed Nick, sucked him off, swallowed his cum, but he was also name-calling, forceful (not in a good way), selfish and actually savage. You could have shifted him a bit but this was an extreme change in his overall vibe. He comes across here as mostly a selfish arrogant asshole who doesn’t care about Nick or Francis or their feelings. Not a fan of such complete out of character behavior. But it’s a great story and Matt will be leaving soon so we’ll see what the damage here is. I hope Nick starts to demand some respect for himself instead of just being ok to be both brothers’ sex toy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I'm disappointed in Matt's change in attitude, I really liked how nice he was to Nick and now it seems like he's just using him. He seemed to care before but now he's just acting like Francis

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