by drunkwife
Wonderful imagery coupled with appealing characters in a sexually charged environment. What is there not to like about this very enjoyable story? Thank you for sharing this post. :)
Really awesome, well done. I enjoyed how much you loved sucking Jack's dick. Hot stuff!
Well-Done story, wish I'd looked at your bio page before reading. What a photo / body !
Loved it! Gave it five stars and a favorite point. Was hoping that the neighbor/cleaning lady would join in on the fun and games, too.
Thank you, I love that story, it's so erotic and well written which makes it all the better.
Very well written! Really enjoyable with your descriptions making me feel I was there. It was very erotic as well and I do hope you find the time to write more! I'm off to read your other submissions! BTW great bio and FANTASTIC photo!!!! Damn I sure wouldn't travel if you in sleeping in my bed ... and I'm glad you like older men!! Cheers Lance
A wonderful and well written story. The lead up to the climax (pun intended) was lovely reading and being from Montana made the story all the more fun because it was so easy to visualize the setting, and the fun they had in such a place. I too would like to see more of Sara's adventure's as she goes into the future with the sort of "training" this older gentleman gave her.
Thanks!
Ted
Yes, they typically have the experience to know how to please, don't have a hair trigger, and are appreciative of the aphrodisiac effect a younger woman gives them.
A well-crafted story. You paint such intensely erotic images with words, dear. BTW, is the avatar you? :-)
Dear Sara, Finished reading several of your stories. Took a look at your bio and saw your personals and the pic. Enjoyed the top view but why the camo bottoms? Anyway, you write a hot story and provide great verbal visuals. Thank you for the journey and I will look forward to more in the future. jntiques
Loved your story, you made the relationship very erotic and mutually fun.
Thanks for sharing your writing
Great story - You made ME fall for Jack!
We have all had an older man that has invaded our daydreams and most often our late night fantasies!
How many nights have I fallen asleep and wish I was beside a mature lover that would fulfill that need to be touched by an experienced older man who doesn't fumble or falter...he knows how to touch and how to please!
YUMMY