All Comments on 'For the Love of Two Sisters Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
LOVE IT

LOVE THE STORY. NOTHIN ELSE LIKE IT. PLZ KEEP GOIN. WILL READ THEM ALL,!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I love how sweet and naive it is!

Can't wait for more!

robo057robo057almost 8 years ago

I can't wait for more. Really enjoying it so far, their shyness is so endearing.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
Great story...like your writing!

Hoping for more...like the way this is going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Twice the romance

This story seams to have a lot going for it so please keep it going thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent writing

Love the ESL voice of milena. Sounds like Sofia Vergara in my head.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice buildup

The slow buildup is very nice, the tensions that are buildinv are working nicely.

Hope you keep this up!

mammoetmammoetalmost 8 years ago
Great story

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
lol

Rofl

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Yep!!! I knew that was going to come back and bite Milena in her ass. That seed of doubt has been planted and the tree WILL grow. It's inevitable. Maybe she can pull a rabbit out of her hat and convince Gene that she's sincere. 🤔 But even I'm not entirely certain of her motivation, even being privy to all of the conversations that Gene hasn't heard. In her own heart is Milena fooling herself a little bit too?

PrefshavenPrefshavenover 1 year ago

Pretty good story. Liked it a lot.

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