All Comments on 'The Making of a Kingpin Ch. 07'

Glad you started writing again by far my favorite series on literotica

Great follow up - love the series. Jose is a great alpha contender for Troy and the energy in their scene is crazy. I want to see more with those two! Please keep it up and don't make us wait so long next time, please!!

Finally some competition for Troy!!! Can't wait for the rest

Great story. Really appreciate the attention to descriptive detail in this series. So, I hope the following comment will receive consideration in the spirit it is given:

nonplussed

adjective

1) Bewildered; unsure how to respond or act.

2) (proscribed, US, informal) Unfazed, unaffected, or unimpressed.

Source: wiktionary.org

It seems a little out of place to use the informal--and, in my view, incorrect--interpretation of the word 'nonplussed" in an otherwise very well-written piece of prose.

The "Super Alpha Male Wins Everything" thing gets really old, really fast. I'm glad you're back and I'm glad Troy looks to beheading to getting fucked.

Ideally, the Father would figure things out. You don't create a crime family and control a big city without knowing everything, and old habits are hard to put down. Just a thought.

Killer series - love the new rival and shit is heating up. Is there a new chapter on the way??

It is one of the best stories here! Please continue! And please let Troy win at the end!

Any hopes of this continuing? Huge fan

Is this story going to get updated? I check weekly. Please say yes!