All Comments on 'Make Me Obey'

by SykoSara

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 8 years ago

Nicely done, Sara.

"Break me gently; have me hard" has to be the erotic line of the week.

visioneervisioneeralmost 8 years ago

One of the best D/s themed poems I've encountered on Lit. This is a beautiful, powerful line:

"This submissive heart thunders,

At the eye of His storm."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Kajira

The girl has the makings to be a fine kajira

Tal,

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
THE REVERSE OF SANCHO P

sans the windmills, TK U MLJ LV NV

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