All Comments on 'Queen Slime's Slave'

An interesting story. I'm kind of curious to see where it goes next. Keep on going.

Fantastic! Maybe make it a transformative tale, where the slime queen converts her into a slime and she goes out and takes others for her mistress?

You definitely should do another Chapter! This is HOT!

Looking forward to more

I hope your grammar improves. It's supposed to be one speaker per paragraph. Start a new paragraph when another person speaks.

Looking good so far. Slow down a bit and give some more details to draw it out. Very hot though and a great idea.

I want more of this, but the whole slime thing isn't a one page affair. Make it long, slow, erotic, full of full body orgasms and creative tentacles

The story is good, but it was too short. Would love another one. Either a continuation or a new dickgirl story