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Accepted you, with writing skills like this? "My parents had drove me here"

Get an editor.

He (or she, perhaps) is right. Remember that Tom Clancy had an editor.

On the other hand, he/she did not say don't write more. Click on the volunteer editor button and you can probably find someone willing to help. Now, I've submitted two whole stories, so.you know the range of my vast experience. But try it and keep writting stories that bring back those memories. And this one did for me

I look forward to seeing what else you will write

I wrote this a few years ago, then recently (and haphazardly) chopped it up and put it back together, hence some of the grammatical mistakes like the tense changing. Plus I'm a math guy, not so much a writer. When I read the original version I realized there was too much info that someone could use to recognize what school and when I was there, hence the last minute editing. I have a few more experiences I want to write about, and I'll try to find an editor for the next ones.