All Comments on 'Subway'

I like this short story, though the subway never came to me as a place for erotic encounters.

It would be nice if you continued this into something more!

Hope you continue this story, I really liked it! =)

Marvelous stand-alone story. Write more but let this story end where it does, it is so erotic and allows you to feel it and not be spoon-fed an ending.

This is brilliant. I'd love to see a continuation of the relationship. Perhaps you could build up to them finally leaving the train and going somewhere more private. Don't remove the slightly reluctant/non consensual feeling from her, or the dominant possessiveness from him, though, that makes it very exciting, and almost forbidden! Especially if she's a virgin!

Really loved this story, it really got me wet

Love this story. Beautifully written. Love the language and style used. That's a turn on in itself ;)

Thanks for writing. Look forward to reading more from you.

- LittleMiss

So seductive and mysterious, short and sweet!

-Racing Queen