by Tim Smith
Or...instead of doing all of this you invite the psycho back over to your house, shoot his ass dead and tell the cops he attacked you.
This is simple torture porn.
Skimmed for a few paragraphs and voted one star.
This was abusive torture.
Whatever happened to erotic stories?
There was nothing sexy or erotic about this.
Don't worry about what the idiots are saying. The theme of the story was in the description, if they can't read that then maybe they shouldn't be reading Literotica.
People who don't know your work - and you are just about my absolute favorite - might be surprised by the use of toys and the way women are extremely challenged without ever actually getting hurt. You always set your stories up really well making them seem plausible while still being way, way out there! I know you have another "part 1" story that's unfinished and I hope you either tell us what happens next on this one or revisit that one. Either way please don't let the readers who are shocked (shocked I tell you!) and appalled that apparently some dirty stuff is happening in your wonderful stories! Maybe they can find a nice romance novel with an open shirted Fabio like pirate on the cover!
Thank you Mr. Smith!
I've always loved your stories. Please keep them coming and don't be phased by folks that don't understand.
The man with broken English IS the customer from Seattle. Sarah neglected to read the small print in her contract regarding "optional extras". After a satisfactory "test drive" days earlier the customer has decided to take advantage of this option for a few thousand dollars more. Newly purchased Sarah has been relegated to an existence as a fuck toy in a box.