All Comments on 'Mischief on a Midsummer Night'

Very hot and intense. Thanks!

I want more of this story, more fucks.

Author bounces back and forth between first person story and third person. Even in the space of the same sentence! If you are going to write. Learn English composition rules. Thats a grade school mistake. RPS Michigan.

As per the above comment from Anonymous, I made some errors bouncing between first and third person which can not be revised at this moment. I write many stories a week, in either first and third person, and without an editor, tired, a little tipsy and under deadline, errors were made. No excuses, just an explanation. I apologize if this ruined your reading experience. My English teacher mother would be mortified, more by my grammatical errors than my writing of erotica.

it could have been lots better, no seduction, just a vague introduction to the characters, and little more, only a two star from me, but I will read more from this author and see I this was a fluke or normal writing from them.

Pick a narration style and stick with it the entire story.

First person, third person, this story was just uncontrollable lust. estoy caliente 🔥

Besides Caroline never woke up, and it was just Bree and the dad, just the 'two' of them. Dad you got it bad for the little girl cock tease