All Comments on 'I Dream of Angels Pt. 03'

Grrrr....That fake ending was grrr, but the real ending as you put it. Nicely romantic.

Your evil with that fake ending. Great story keep it up

I enjoyed the story very much, eagerly awaiting the next chapter after each. Well drawn characters, thorough description of their experiences, and an interesting metaphysical premise I can identify with.

I'm not sure which ending I like more (possibly the first one), but I liked them both a lot. I don't read a lot, but this story gripped me so hard from the start that I might actually read it again. Thank you very much for writing this!

- R

Dude, that troll ending was just plain mean.

Don't scare us like that.

That fake ending was really mean of you but at least it added some flavor to the story. Anyway good job on the story👍

And your a real jokester too!

I had tears in my eyes for the fake ending, then I was laughing 2 seconds later. You totally got me hahaha. Loved it! Great story :) Will def be reading it, in it's entirety, again sometime. Please keep writing awesome stories.

I should kill you and send you back to the Eye of God. You made me an emotional wreak with that fake ending you made me cry like a baby. I should give you ⭐️ star for that. Try that again mister and I will...I wasn't quite sure with this story after reading chapter one and held my vote to see in which direction you would proceed. The storyline was interesting and certainly different that's for sure. you had me intrigued to how you would explain Angel. I actually thought you got away with both endings , the fake one being more emotional the story could have ended there but for me the extended more happier ending was my choice. Overall ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I honest to God cried when I read the fake ending. Seriously though, you're an amazing writer and if you ever write a full sized book, I will definitely buy it.

Very deep and thoughtful

I hate you so much but at the same time thanks for this novel. Please never stp what you do :)

there ate the end. No doctor would ever take the heart of a healthy person and swap it with a damaged heart from another.

I can take the thought that he "created" a life somehow. But the surgery was ridiculous and totally unbelievable. You ruined the story at the end.

Wrong website - very little realistic behaviour is expressed on this site

Wrong story - the story clearly depicts a world that is similar but different to our own, rendering your realism argument invalid

Wrong time - the story was really sweet, and a review that is basically "adios, and here's your flame" is both discouraging to the author, and just a way to have readers leave with a bad taste in their mouths.

I'm not sure how I feel about this story. I went back and read all three parts again, as soon as I finished the third chapter. Some of the philosophies make sense to me, some don't - and that's okay. It's a very metaphysical journey, and the endings both make metaphysical sense, although not in a real sense.

However, like it or not, I will be thinking about it for a long time which is perhaps the object, and besides, the writing is excellent and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Honestly i was scared that angel and marcus might not be able to stay together and good lord, the shock you gave at last when you gave the first ending, i actually felt my eyes moisten. Only if we could meet our soul mate like that then i would gladly go through all that pain and suffering. Really beautiful plot and storyline, excellent proof reading.

And if anyone gives you lip about realism then tell em to kiss where the sun don't shine. Thank you author.

Spoiled with that second ending.

I’m man enough to admit I teared up a bit when angel died, but thank the gods you made it a happy ending, phew... had me going there for a minute

OMG, the first ending had me crying, thank you for making it a happy one.

The best story I’ve read for a long time. Thank you.

That was a cruel alternate ending.

Great work overall

That was a great ending. You put so much Emotion into this story.