All Comments on 'Allison The Lifeguard Ch. 01'

I enjoyed this. Keep it up

Its so evilish, and manipulative, makes me want to write, you're awesome if people can be followed on this website I'm following you when I figure this website out!

Its so sexy, but i wont get into TMI ;)

I hope you develop this story further!!

Loved the story, really hope you continue developing it!

Great start for a new author, you seem to know what you're doing! Would love for this to continue and looking forward to seeing other stories aswell!

A bit slam bam thank you ma'am. Tease us a bit more.

I have a major problem, I'm a lesbian and I have a major problem when men are involved in "so called" lesbian stories! This would have been really hot between the two women. Even so you write well for a newbie! Jenny Elf.

Great story

this was so erotic. I hope you feel it is worth another chapter. it hit me so hard and lovingly. thank you

Excellent. time for chapter two. well over due