All Comments on 'The Hidden Retreat'

This was a pretty lame effort. The characters are barely one-dimensional, the plot is prepostrous, the dialogue is clunky and it goes on fir far too long. Dull, dull, dull...

Unlike the first commentor, I enjoyed the story. The twist at the end was a unique one. Hidden desires can lead to strange bed mates. I wonder what she told her boss on Tuesday?

Thanks for this one.

I liked it a lot, I read it twice. Whoever the first commenter was clearly has no imagination or understanding of erotic build-ups.

Just wondering.

You referred to my comment ("lame") in a disparaging way. The purpose of this section is to critique the story, not those commenting. I stand by my comments, I thought the story was awful. You liked it - fine, I'm not going to make sweeping statements about you. (even though I'm sorely tempted ;-)

None of this stuff ever happens to me and probably won't ever, but i do know that as a highly sexual charged person, people do crazy things that seem unrealistic in order to meet sexual desires. Also, as a reader that understands that this story forum is largely fiction, i have no problem lettings things go in the stories I read because it's part of the build up. That all said i very much enjoyed the story and appreciate the author's efforts. A second chapter with Natasha and her boss paired up would be terrific with hints thrown but no certainty for Natasha how much the boss knows about her past weekend.

So many of my fantasies in this story, *sigh*. Would love it if something like this were to happen to me. Keep writing!!

This is a dreamy romantic story from start to finish. The style of writing is not outstanding, but the story overcomes it very well.