All Comments on 'Becoming a Slut'

I like the concept, and you write decent heat, but your story seems like it's one more editing pass away from being Literotica ready.

How luscious to be turned into a total Slut and never ever saying no to Cock again.

What sex loving woman wouldn't crave to have her inner slut released and have her man share get with as many men as he can find!

I would have loved it had she had gotten to the bar and her boyfriend unleashes her and stands back to enjoy her being the Slut she has become.

Interesting enough, but the story definitely needs some fleshing out, it barely makes sense as it is.