All Comments on 'A Midnight Walk'

This was not too bad, but the long first-person narrative makes it more than boring, it puts the reader to sleep. Next story, or a re-write of this one, think seriously of adding dialogue. He said, I said, they said,.... keeps a story moving along and with dialogue, you can say those hot, nasty, delicious words to jolt the reader into feeling sexy and aroused and horny.

Incredible read! Really got me turned on without being raunchy. Very sensual and detailed. I could picture myself meeting a soon to be new friend of my own in this way! Hope you'll do more stories. :)

Nice simple little story - love to see what you do next.