All Comments on 'My Neighbor is My Best Friend'

the sex part was awfully rushed...

"Jerry then puts his whole mouth over my dick. He gives me a great blowjob. He nicely squeezes my balls. It feels amazing. His tongue glides over my dick and I cant stop looking at him in the act.

I moan and moan and after a few short minutes, I burst in his mouth. Jerry swallows the whole load. He gets off of his knees and I stand up."

10 seconds worth of sex is a little too fast for me...maybe you need a little more detail to the actual sex part of your story...

Amplify the sex act it self more but nice start, continue the story line.

da.cd@frontier.com

Loved the story. About like me, I was a lil younger, A nieghborhad me suck him, after catching me wearing moms cloths,. Those were some hot years of suckin and getting fucked by a few older men,. Oh to be young again./

herfun101@yahoo.com / love to chat

I think it should have been longer. However I can understand you coming fast your first time. Please continue this story, I am sure there is a lot more to tell.

It was a god story; but it could have been much longer. For instance, over time, Jerry could have taught him more and more.

I came so much reading this, dressed in lingerie right now with an 8 inch vibrator all the way up me...I hit my chin with the first spurt...mmmmm

So erotic .. I remember the first time a man came on my face... totally unexpected, but so sexy... he apologised profusely but I loved it...insisting he alternate between my face and mouth on future ocassions

I'm sure the next time, instead of his face, He had the whole thing down his throat, and wanting more. Once you get a nice taste of cream, your hooked

Buddy, this was so bad buddy that I can’t express my feelings for this buddy piece of total garbage buddy. Try again buddy and maybe next time buddy you can actually write something worth wasting time over buddy. SMH