at sunset. An beautiful observation in metaphor. Very good...
jim : )
A common observation nicely drawn.
The colors are all there
and cloud wisps too.
Nature's nightly jewels
abound around Gaia's neck
before the tiara in her hair,
the diamonds nightly in the air.
Please keep writing like this.
Your imagery is very strong.
...done. A pleasure to read!
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