All Comments on 'Alpha Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So worth the wait !!

Omg story keeps getting better and better.. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Definitely worth the wait

Please continue the story:) <3

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 7 years ago
Awesome chapter!

Glad you're back. Please update regularly now. I want some closure for these two.

willieonewillieoneover 7 years ago

I agree with cantfightfate's comment

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 7 years ago
Thank you for the update

Great story, I beg you to continue!

FallenTreasureFallenTreasureover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you guys and thank you for your comments! I am hoping to start uploading more regularly but with editing, holidays coming up and other writing that I am hoping will be up soon it takes time. Thank you so much for your patience and I promise I will keep writing about these guys, I've fallen in love with them! Fallen <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you

Am Oliver twist I want more....I read six pages and I wished it didn't end. . . Please keep it coming.......

MelanPoncaMelanPoncaover 7 years ago
Great stuff!!

Hey FT!,

It's nice to see you posting your fine efforts here again! Rest assured, we readers have lives every bit as busy as yours; we just don't want to admit we're jonesin' for a fix of your story!

Please enjoy your holidays, especially your time with family and friends, and know we'll be waiting (perhaps not patiently) for your return.

Thanks again!!

UnicornofLoveUnicornofLoveover 7 years ago
Hot!

What I liked about this story was the opposite acctraction of Drago and Eala and their chemistry and how they sexually communicate that in your story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
MORE, MORE, MORE!!

Please continue this story! Please don't leave it here. There is so much more you can do with it, maybe even expand on it into a book. I have tons of ideas for that if you're ever interested?? Contact me- kerrynesbitt@live.com

EmeraldGreenWhoreEmeraldGreenWhoreover 6 years ago
Couldn't Stop Reading

Oh wow!

This has been by far one of the best series I've read on here.

You're characters, the details, the storyline, it all works seamlessly.

I'll admit the first chapter I was slightly confused but I wanted more and you seriously delivered.

Thank you for giving me a series I'll be coming back to again and again.

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