by Benjamin_Winter
I would be grateful if you found it suitable to continue it.
I am lucky to have known love, and I love reading of real love as this story is.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Just 1 tiny thing, to satisfy the grammar nazi in me. 'laid' as opposed to 'lied' which either the simple past of lie (as in telling a lie) or some German song thing. Otherwise, excellent submission!
I don't think it possible to forget love making like this, no matter how gray I become.
I'm glad you shared with us.
Hard to imagine an arranged marriage clicking like this, but fun to read. It ended so abruptly, though!
Dude, I’ve been reading a bunch of your stories and I love them. They’re just good writing, I don’t really know what makes it so good but it is. No worries was just phenomenal and this is great, the sorcerer one made me a bit uncomfortable but as I make my way through your profile, I just love your writing. It’s incredible.