All Comments on 'Silk and Silver'

by Benjamin_Winter

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dani_lrlmdani_lrlmover 7 years ago
Like your story very much.

I would be grateful if you found it suitable to continue it.

I am lucky to have known love, and I love reading of real love as this story is.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Just 1 tiny thing, to satisfy the grammar nazi in me. 'laid' as opposed to 'lied' which either the simple past of lie (as in telling a lie) or some German song thing. Otherwise, excellent submission!

LeenysmanLeenysmanover 7 years ago
Prince's name?

Was it intentional not to reveal the Prince's name?

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
A good read.

I don't think it possible to forget love making like this, no matter how gray I become.

I'm glad you shared with us.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 6 years ago
Fantastic

I hate First person stories. This one is an exception.

buttdoc67buttdoc67over 5 years ago
Short!

Hard to imagine an arranged marriage clicking like this, but fun to read. It ended so abruptly, though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Dude, I’ve been reading a bunch of your stories and I love them. They’re just good writing, I don’t really know what makes it so good but it is. No worries was just phenomenal and this is great, the sorcerer one made me a bit uncomfortable but as I make my way through your profile, I just love your writing. It’s incredible.

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