All Comments on 'Sleeping Beast Ch. 04'

This chapter is so good. I love your pacing and the unfolding drama. I'm so curious to see how this progresses and how you'll reconcile the two brothers and Troi. The best part about this is that it feels like a real fairy tale, minus some of the naughty bits :).

I'm also about 2 days into researching different types of 18th century ships and their layouts. why do we do this to ourselves?

A FEW WEEEKS?!?!?!!? WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH A WAIT TIME OF A FEW WEEKS!!! I WANT MY HEA AND MY ANSWERS NOW!!!!!!!!!!OMG,WHAT IS HAPPENING?!!? THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!! HURRY BACK,JERK!!!! :-) 50 FUCKING STARS!!!!!!

Loving this story. Intrigued as to where it is going. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I absolutely love this story. Though I hope you stop torturing poor Argus

"nuff said".

This isn't my normal kind of story. Not sure why I even clicked on it.

but I enjoyed it immensely. Nice job and hoping for more.

4*

I love you so much, your stories are GREAT

I love this story!!

I love this story, I check back every 2 weeks just to make sure not to miss out.

This is a brilliant story to read. I love the way you write. I wonder how the three of them will resolve this, my heart is just breaking for poor Argus.

It's fascinating how you are able to conjure up all these impressive female personalities. Okay, the men are insanely diverse in all your stories too, but I'm female, so it's association, etc + stuff. By the way, isn't there a way we can bribe or blackmail the universe and its cronies sufficiently so that these 2 brothers can solidify and manifest? Can I have one if I get it right? At least on Mondays? I'll pay?

Read this chapter twice and still piddled myself -again. It's embarrassing. I'm in love with an 'invisible friend', SOMEBODY ELSE'S 'invisible friend'. Thank the great penis in the sky you said you are suffering from the same symptoms, but at least you can tell the doctor (who brings along two burly policeman, just in case), that it's okay, as they are YOUR invisible friends and that makes it okay. I think. Hey, maybe you can make them possess the two police-m....aaaaaaaahHHHHH...aaa...a. 2 week.k.k.k.s.s.s. Just joking - good stuff is worth waiting for.

All the best and plenty love!

I like the story a lot but I can't help but feel really bad for Argus. The woman he loves is in love with his beastly brother that he has had to take care of for a really long time. He tries his best to keep Troitsa safe and deny his feelings but then almost gets killed. He loses consciousness whenever Nivid takes over. Seriously the poor guy is like the punching bag of the story. Idk maybe I am alone in this but I feel for him. It must be so very heartbreakingly lonely for him.

I figured shed fall in love with Argus not Nivid. I dont know how this'll pmay out but i have faith Argus will be alright. Even though he deserves Trin's love more. Especially because it looks like hes been looking out for nivid since the curse came along

Uploaded it shortly after midnight (Wednesday) so hopefully it will be up this weekend.

I was team argus.

Totally engrossing with the latest twists: love and not kin? Feel sure that the plot will evolve itself so that Argus is resolved in some way.

I don't know why people don't think nivid doesn't deserve troitsta it isn't like he can help that he's a beast like what do people expect the story is called sleeping beast. I find argus' love for troista to be a dirty like he betrayed his brother by falling in love with his girl I don't feel sorry for him.