All Comments on 'Zoey's Perfect Man is a Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Mmm, short and sexy as all fuck.

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 7 years ago
Short but well constructed

This was a well written short story - have you thought of continuing with Zoey's education

plumberdonplumberdonover 7 years ago
first time lesbian

very well done and with great feelings. Loved it-Thanks. Will we get more of Zoey?

xeriscapartistxeriscapartistover 7 years ago
Well done!

I thought that you did a really nice job telling your story. The characters were developed nicely and they were both likeable. The pacing of the story was brisk, but the details were flushed out well.

Besides, I love stories about a first time!

Thanks for sharing. I look forward to seeing where this story might go.

teddybearclubteddybearclubover 7 years ago
Short but Sweet

Totally enjoyed this. You should continue this. So wet now.

TBC

misstresschris007@gmail.com

If you want to contact me.

pierced_boypierced_boyabout 7 years ago
this was fun

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wow That's Hot!! _ I Love It!!!

Hallo Fiona and Zoey,,, I loved your new story "Zoey's Perfect Man is a Girl", and being told through Zoey's eyes is really hot!

Thank you, I loved it, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms! More chapters please!!

Gay Kat.

literotliterotabout 7 years ago
There's a message here Fi ...

Reading through the other comments.

"More chapters please!!"

"You should continue this"

"I look forward to seeing where this story might go."

"Will we get more of Zoey?"

Get the message? :-)

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Great story!

Unfortunately I read the sequel first :'( Thank you very much for sharing this with us!

plumberdonplumberdonabout 7 years ago
friends

Beautiful story well done with good feelings.Your first timeis one to always remember-Loved it Thanks

Randee1958Randee1958over 6 years ago
WONDERMENT🌌🌌💥💥

This story had all the trimmings. This is definitely not or should not be a one off. Listen to your readers comments and bring us more of Zoey and Fiona.

5🌟's

Slowandeasy47Slowandeasy47about 6 years ago
Fantastic

You show us how to truly pleasure a woman

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic

What a great erotic tale about first times.

I loved the realism described. Did this actually happen?

I am very much looking forward to reading your other stories here.

Favorite author clicked.

Thank you.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 5 years ago

Short & sweet. Loved it. Please continue

XactoXactoabout 2 years ago

Short, sweet, and steamy. Thank you!

msspnnrmsspnnrabout 2 years ago

Awesome discovery story leaving me wanting more.

GayKatGayKatover 1 year ago

Wow!... That Is Still Hot!

Hallo Fiona and Zoey, I loved your new story "Zoey's Perfect Man is a Girl", and being told through Zoey's eyes is really hot!

Thank you, I loved it, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms!

Oh yeah where is chapter 2 !?!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

JACKBETHJACKBETH2 months ago

Ooooo god its a good sexy story

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