All Comments on 'Work Wife Turns Mistress'

This story was written with the vocabuary of a 35 year old but the imagination of a 13 year old - just can't get into the story at all.

2/5

I look forward to reading more of your work

I look forward to writing more. Sorry for the lack of imagination. Good feedback thoughbas thisnis my first story ever published.

A good start with your first story! Good theme. Keep posting, but develop your style!

Many can relate to title of this story

I liked this. Don't be put off by negative comments. Good first attempt and write more.

5'10" ginger with a micropenis. Of Course they get all the hot girls. Comically ridiculous.