All Comments on 'Indecision'

by silverisgold

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ha

Amusing shot at an ultimate male fantasy. Huge-breasted hotty wants him so much she drugs him, then his suddenly kinky wife gets off on hearing about it. Totally realistic. In fact this happened to me 6 times last year. It's a bitch being ridiculously handsome and rich.

silverisgoldsilverisgoldabout 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks

What I will never understand about some people on this site is how they can spend all their time shitting on works instead of creating something of their own. If you can do better, then prove it. Not to show me, but so you can get off your ass, because even writing a mediocre story or a bad painting or singing or acting badly is better than not doing it and merely sitting back as a snarky person who thinks they're clever. It'll make you a better person in every single way, try it out.

Redwings1202Redwings1202about 7 years ago
Very good...

Certainly one of the better stories I've read on Literotica. Excellent writing, great dialogue, good character reveals. Ending was a bit gratuitous but, overall, a really good read!

rnebularrnebularabout 7 years ago
Good story

And loved the angle, haven't seen too many like it. Sadly some puerile just sit and look for things to whine about, but you did a great job here. Thanks for sharing! 5* from me.

rnebularrnebularabout 7 years ago
Autocorrected lol

People, not whatever that other word was.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Really a good story

No complaints or suggestions, just a really fun and enjoyable read. This is a good one off story but there is room here for a sequel at the show in Chicago. Maybe a threesome? Just thinking.

I am not very generous with 5* Mostly 2, 3 or 4. (If it is so bad that I cannot finish it, I don't rate it because I haven't read all of it. But this story is a 5* story. Thanks for sharing.

enseignerenseignerabout 7 years ago
Great!

Loved your story, I think you should keep it a one off. Hope you do more. Easy 5 stars for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Chapter 2.....threesome with the wife AND Mariah in Chicago. So hot!!

lolax2lolax2over 6 years ago
I loved it!

That was amazing! This need a part 2 Please!

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