All Comments on 'Droit du Serpent'

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JadestoyJadestoyabout 7 years ago
Wow

That was quite good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

good story. hope there will be more to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This was really good. I sincerely hope that there's more to it in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Interesting back story. Love to know more and what happens in next! Chapter 2 please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
good beginning

But, please...It's "ground", not "grinded"; and" Thrust" is the past tense of "thrust".

No such word as " thrusted".

Both misuses are common on Literotica and it drives me nuts..Kills the momentum of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I want that little robot thing she has. Does it sound like R2D2? Questions. Questions. Questions.

Overall opinion of the story? Amazing.

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