All Comments on 'The Cougar Tamer'

watermelon tits and Frodo with a foot long subway cock lol- give me a fucking break

This story has potential for more chapters. For example, integrating Wilma into their sexual romps, expanding sexual activities, Herbie's increased control of Debra, etc.

Obviously, they can't write and don't have the ability to own their comments. While the extraordinary breasts and a footlong penis are highly unlikely, they do not distract from this story. We are reading erotic fiction. I would have enjoyed more detail about Herbie's initial dalliance with Mrs. Parker. Maybe that could be written as a prequel or part of the next chapter. I would also enjoy the continued domination of Debra Fenway, where she continues to need Herbie's cock and he is able to use her ass. Mrs. Parker providing guidance and also getting involved would be erotic, too. I also encourage you to have an editor and use spellcheck.

Why not give him a 2 foot cock? Someone might believe that too -you think?

While people may quibble about size in this story i think they are just bitching for the sake of bitching.

I also agree that this story can definitely go a long way if you stay true to it and do not rush chapters or make them too long.

Possible ways for this to go would be for Wilma t notice a change in Debra and question it as if she has no idea then let Herbie integrate her into it.

Have them do and wear things that test her limits.

Please though stay true to the characters and the story and continue it is a great story so far.

Who cares about size? It's a story. Enjoy it. Please add more chapters.

The Cougar in the title was.

Glad to have read it

Like always those with stupid comments are anonymous, so just ignore them.

Some mistakes were made but a lot because of some kind of spelling or dictionary program i think so read it back to take these out.

It is fiction so a few inches more or less who cares, the overall story is great in my opinion and please go on, this ending is so open it screams for more! 5***** from me.

While I was expecting the usual storyline of a hot cougar and young stud getting it on, I was greatly surprised by the delightful character development. A young dorky dweeb being taught to be a man, a hungry cougar searching forever for what she wants, then each finding out they are what they are. BRAVO !! I'm not sure where I would take a sequel to this storyline, but I am the reader, not the author, lol.

Hopefully there will be a sequel storyline.

Thanks for sharing.

Loved the humorous touch to Debra's feminine emotional frailties. I chuckled or laughed aloud frequently through the whole story. Size is meaningless without skill. This tale begs continuation.

Oh boy! That's ridiculous...

Man, a woman with such an experience leaves the dumb boy waving like a flag, promise.

A very well done and surprising story that satisfies. There is great potential in the characters. Nicely done:)

Brilliant ... great read and looking for so much more :)

***** Hot read Hotter sex damn good story. Thanks for sharing.

Great story!!!!

I stopped reading at "1 foot long" ...

Real good. D

Stupid.

GIANT TITS

FOOT LONG COCK

DOMINANT TEENAGER

FUCKED ALL TOWN’S ATHLETES

TYPICAL IMMATURE CHILDISH FANTASY