All Comments on 'The Pirate King Ch. 01'

I found a few minor editing slip ups, but none of us who try our hand at this can find them all. They were few and far enough between not to detract from the adventure you've set us on.

The characters are engaging and sexy. Their sexual tension runs high. You gave great thought to a setting you can't possibly have experienced first hand; so much so that it reads with authenticity. I give you five stars and extend a hearty welcome. I look forward to future chapters.

I have read a lot of stories on this site for about 7 years now, I do not just read for the sex, I love reading. One of the best in a long time, looking forward to the next chapter, so excited. I am not even into domination stories, I am a 47 year old unromantic woman who loves gay romance between burly men.

Please write more. This may be the hottest thing I've ever read! Seriously, I can't be happy with any other erotic story now that I've seen this.

Such a powerful, intriguing, fucking hot start. Can't wait to see more from you!

Crushingly excruciatingly hot, truly. The build up is sublime, the pacing is great, the emotional entanglement painful. More, please, sir. quickly.

each word and phrase was pulling me in as if I was on the end of the rope, more moremore

the best one!

Both of your stories absolutely elate me with their clear-cut definitions of consent & the emphasis on why it is important. Thank you xx

love it

wow! your way with words are such beautiful poetry, it's masterful and magical! I wish I could rate ut 10 stars!

It's rare to find a story of quality that I genuinely enjoy for the writing and/or story on smut sites. I'm thoroughly invested in the story of these men now, and I really appreciate the pirate captain's ethics and concern. Good job! I loved it. Keep doing amazing things and thanks for sharing your talent with us!

so sexy! awesome writing

Thank you for such a brilliant opening!

What is the name of the ship?