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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
GREAT

Keep seeing him. Let us here. all about it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent!!

Another excellent story, and thank you for being so creative. Personally, I prefer tales of an older woman, involved interracially, with a fair bit of coercion thrown in. I think that a description of the lady dealing with her moral dilemma adds a great deal to the plotline.

Many thanks,

Mr.B

StormbringerStormbringerabout 7 years ago
Fantastic!

Another great one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing!

Can't wait for more chapters. I really hope Katy has a slow progression into a full on black cock slut and I would love to see her get gang banged.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not good as ur previous stories

Didn't like this story..its just see a black cock and then sucking it. Its your story but it should be something like non consent..where the guy accidentally got to know that katy was the woman he sent his dick pics and now he is seducing her and teasing her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Swell that hot redheads belly !!

The husband shot his cum in her, why did horse cock pull out, the hot little redhead needs that BLACK CUM shot in her, she needs to get the whole COCK inside her, after she takes it all, she needs to get home and know he fucked her insides up with his horse cock, I think she will have his baby, and I believe her husband gave her phone number to HORSE COCK !!!!! Good story, I am giving you 5 stars !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing, as always!

Another amazing story, I can't wait for future chapters in this series! I love your progress updates and I really look forward to "The Tailor" story! Keep up the awesome work and progress updates!

Adriana

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I can already tell this series is going to be as good as the others you've been writing. Katy's double life is clearly escalating quickly and beyond her control. This double life of hers could now easily turn into her regular life, who knows how far she'll go. That's what I really enjoy about this story as well as your others - there's an element of wonder at what the protagonist or where the overall story is going. The reader can guess and can have a good idea, but is at the same time not too sure of themselves. This is at least how I feel. Very much looking forward to the next phase of her double life, and where it will take her.

chief573chief573about 7 years ago
Great start, keep it up

We can look forward to increasing intimacy and boldness soon. Need sex at her house, maybe with Dwayne deep inside her while talking to hubby on phone. Dwayne needs to start putting heavy fertile loads in the womb and not on face, so he can eventually impregnate her...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great so far

super great ,do not ruin it with gang bangs, foul name calling, visits to black clubs with exposed pussy/ass or shitty neighborhoods and other shit that does not really happen because no woman is going somewhere she is not comfortable just to fuck.you can tell when a white man wrote the story all of the above is usually in the story.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 7 years ago
Love black cock

Great story, keep it going. Big black cock is the best xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
How much COCK ?

How deep did he go inside her ? Why did he pull out ? Has her husband been fixed ? Did her nipples leak during her fuck session with a real COCK inside her ? Will he knock her up ? Please continue with chapter 2, if he was that large did he damage her during the FUCK session ? She does not need a gang bang, or any humiliation, and her family does not need hurting, except the husband whom will cash in on the benefits for having a hot wife whom he will start to take better care of now that he knows how much she needs COCK !!!! 5 STARS,.

GOOD STORY, thanks N.L.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Katy was really anxious and it was exciting with the planning she did to make it happy,maybe Katy and his girl friend hooking up would be a hot item. Great work,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love

What about Katy falling in love with Dwayne and moving out with him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Love how Katy is willing to act as a girlfriend to a younger man. Cannot wait to see her wanting to do more kinky things for him even though she is married. Maybe dressing even more sexy when they are together, or stop wearing panties at home by his request, begging him to cum inside when they fuck, etc.

Swel1Swel1about 7 years ago
She's Hooked

Wife and I love your story. Reminds us of her experience on a cruise.

cockcriticcockcriticalmost 7 years ago

A well written story enjoyed it very much, looking forward to the next chapter.

First story I have not had to criticise spelling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more

very good. you NEED to write additional chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Chapter 2?

Katy is now going to want to spend a full day or night with Dwayne several times a week. Her conflict will be how to accomplish that away from her family. Her desire for an extended fucking in the privacy and comfort of a hotel room will drive her. Maybe she will bring a girlfriend into her plan for an extended visit as an excuse to be away and still cover for her if necessary.

I do not want to see her get pregnant since she only wants sex. Dwayne could easily fall in love and become her lustful full time lover. A young man with an older woman is a dynamite connection. I had that as a young man. It was a fabulous relationship for both of us

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next Chapter?

Just like everyone else waiting for the next chapter. Soon maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter 2??

Please!!! Need the next chapter! :)

TocoHillTocoHillover 6 years ago
Why the suspense?

Erotic story with fantastic multi chapter potential. Where's the next installment? Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I see I am not the only one asking...

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER??

Great story, please keep writing (actually, please keep writing all your stories)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Has anyone mentioned....

the NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER

CockholeCockholeover 6 years agoAuthor
The Next Fucking Chapter?

It's coming soon.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
OMG this is fucking hot

I just reread your story and now i’m Moving to the next chapter. I so want that BBC in my hot 42 yr old married pussy. I want to drain every drop and swallow all of you. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Superb story beginnimg

Gripping narrative and plausible character arc regarding Katy's starting desire for interracial sex.

dommasterjimdommasterjimover 6 years ago
Excellent story... !!!

Can hardly wait for the next installment ,, Solid 5* !!

dommasterjimdommasterjimover 6 years ago
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Lilbig16Lilbig16over 6 years ago
Love It!

I love this story. It has become one of my favorite. I love a red head white woman.

RegretsRegretsover 6 years ago
Loved it, even my heart was in my mouth as the security guard caught them

This story kept to the point all the way through and indicated the difficulties ahead of this couple. There is tension in life as soon as we step from the straight and narrow. It is only then that you realise how policed we are, by ourselves,but also by the guards and neighbours out there. I do hope that the second chapter ends with them still enjoying each other and not as I dread to think, and which is all too likely, they are discovered and her world is shattered. Let them have a charmed life. Maybe she can persuade her husband to use her bum, and he finds that it excites him. Obviously Dwayne would be too big for her,but what do I know? Is her husband picking up hidden vibes,which excite him? A natural cuck, still to awake? He might turn out to be the means that they need to carry on.

I thought it unlikely that they could fuck by a picnic table,surely it would be placed where people would likely want to use it? His throwing her knickers into the dirt was foolish, an unnecessary invitation to discovery. I hope that they were quickly binned soon after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Anonymous

Do you intend to continue?

CockholeCockholeover 6 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2

Katy's Double Life Ch. 2 is uploaded and about to post in the next day or so. Keep a look out for it.

davyupdavyupabout 6 years ago
Wow

The sexiest story I’ve read!

ilimitadoilimitadoabout 6 years ago
UNREAL HOT 5*

My god SFH!!!!

What a slut!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So fking hot

Love bbc married sluts. I fantasise a lot with my wife doing the same.

Digger66Digger66over 4 years ago
Loved it!

I love the set up. I can't wait to read part 2. I hope you get Katy's husband involved--him eating creampies. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
After the birth

After the birth of our 4th child I kinda lost interest because I was putting in over time by going in early. Rebecca was a stay at home mom. Till I got home. I helped with a lot of the home chores cooking cleaning mowing getting up with the children while she would sleep.She asked if she could go out for a break I said ok. Then once a week became twice then 3 times. She also was backing off with house chores. So I asked a friend who had done some private investigations in the past if he could help? He said sure. I asked how much? He said let him see what he found out. She was messing around on me. He had pictures and recordings. I asked what I owed him? He said he was sorry but he couldn't change me anything besides what are you going to do? First I am going to confront her see how she reacts and if she is sorry and is sincere and wants to work it out I will try. If she is not wanting to work on our marriage then I will fight her tooth and nail. When I confronted her she said she felt like she was trapped. I said what do you think I felt like think about that. I said how many nights do you go out a week and then tell me when was the last time I got to go out. Hell if you wanted to go out with a man why wouldn't it be with your husband. I just said if you want out of this let me know I won't stand in your way and don't worry about the children I will find someone to watch them while I am at work. That will be about all I will need because that's about all you are doing to help. Then I got up out of the chair and said I am going to bed let me know ASAP because I need to figure out the rest of my life and walked off. I went to shower when I got out she got in. I was in bed when she got out she got in bed and started to mess with me. I stopped her and asked what do you want? She said I want you and my family she was sorry and she will do better. Did you have sex with anyone other than me. Silence. I asked again? Yes. Did he use protection? Crying she said no. Are you pregnant? Not that I know get checked for pregnancy and VD and show me a clean bill of health and call that SOB or those SOB right now on speaker and say it's done and don't tell him I can her so he speaks freely. She did he started telling they could still see each other. She said no that she loved her husband and family and wanted to keep them for it the biggest mistake she ever made in her life what she had done.

brady20brady20about 3 years ago

Damn very hot a d stimulating

Love to eat Katie pussy then tongue fuck her ass

looking forward for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It was decent enough until you introduced Ced. ANY actual woman would have left Dwayne's place immediatley after seeing him there - and would have called the cops when he showed up at her house. This story turned into avomit milkshake at that point.

Just b/c she liked Dwayne never means she would forget how easily he could be replaced.

Try a story with believable characters next time.

dedaniellededanielleover 2 years ago

well developed story. look forward to part 2

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Nothing but a shit sandwich here!

KearsleyKearsleyabout 2 years ago

Did Covid get you?? Nothing from you in so long. I was so looking forward to more stories.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11almost 2 years ago

I loved this story. The misaddressed text was well-explained and the after-effects credible. Good choice that it was a genuine accident and not some lame seduction effort. I might have let Katy stew a bit longer before actually going to see Dwayne. Maybe some more examples of hubby's poor sexual skills.

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77almost 2 years ago

I wasnt with to many boys my age in my teens cause I started with a Older Man and then I got with this one Older Man who became my Special Lover and I wanted him SOooo Much. Wasnt nothing I wouldnt or didnt do for him. I just know how GOOD he fit and made me feel every time he was IN me. I'd spread for him any time any where he wanted. I always wanted to Please Him and make Him Happy no matter what He Done to me or Had me Do. So I liked this story cause it reminded me of my First Black Man I truly think I LOVED and enjoyed spreading for just like Katy did with Dwayne. Oh god if it was Dwayne Johnson I think He SOoo FINE I could Spread for Him to so easy. :-)

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