All Comments on 'Stepbrother'

Rape is rape, no matter how you spin it! Rape is NEVER cool or justified!

but this category of fiction that you're reading here does include rape, as I'm a little surprised you didn't know. You certainly don't have to like that fact, though, and there are lots of other categories here that you may well like better.

Speaking for myself, though this isn't my favorite kind of writing in this category--since I prefer reluctance to literal non-consent, and there were some grammar issues in play that were less than ideal--most notably "cummed," instead of "came"-- there were also some very hot and clever touches in this stort, some of which I hadn't ever seen used before, and I've read tons of stories in this category.

So I hope you'll keep writing. This story already seems to set up nicely for a sequel, and this story as a whole already shows a big improvement over the other one you previously posted here some time ago.

The non consent fits still she went back for more noy rape

somebody is looking forward to a next chapter...!!! containing what? she becoming pregnant by her ruthless rapist stepbrother?!!!! what is a lot of you all's fascination with the rape victim made pregnant by the merciless rapist?!!!

Why are people on here complaining about this content!? You click the non consent and reluctance thread so please don't complain about stories about force. This is a fictitious thread as well. Please be adults and either stay quiet and mad (keeps you from looking like a fool) or don't click NON CONSENT

God just another magic cock story..no matter how brutal a rape as soon as the poor virgin has an orgasm she all of a sudden just can't get enough

This is a stupid story where writer has no idea what female want, how male body works and the whole biology about how a girl gets pregnant... Lame story written without any knowledge

To my readers,

Thank you for your continuous support for my publications. Ratings and comments are always a pleasure to see, even if the comments are anonymous. That being said, to the anonymous users who have the time and are that bothered to comment how I'm a stupid writer, how the story doesn't make sense, and how rape is disgusting, please let me share with you a couple of tips:

1. This is fictitious

2. I don't know how you've forgotten what tab in the story section you clicked, but this is clearly under the non-consent section

3. If you don't agree with the story, or think it's stupid, by all means, just exit the story and keep looking around for one up your alley. If you're that hot and bothered that you decide to leave a comment wondering how anyone could even read this story- you read it AND commented :)

If you want to tell me what you believe I did wrong and how this story sucks, please by all means, feel free to send me a message privately. And grow some fucking balls and don't go under anonymous. :)

PS: If you think a story is overrated, stop being jerks and ruining for others who enjoy hot details, even if they are dumb. If you feel that angry or annoyed then damn, go get laid or something!

I don't mind non-con stories, but this one is poorly written.

I liked the premise and am an avid reader her at noncon but she turned around way too quickly (ye olde magic dickus again) and he kept on "shoving" it in all the time. If you're going to write about sex, at least try to keep it interesting.

It also felt way too rushed in the end.. as a lot of stories about the magic dick does.

Entering with her step-dad's Glock G43...

Can tell this was written by a guy. She was either tied up or not. Bonds don't magically disappear unless it's a magic story. Geese when bam ma'am. See my magical cock and you adore me. Not if you can't use it better than that.

I'm sorry this fictitious story wasn't realistic enough for you. Feel free to write your own very successful and realistic stories instead of wasting time commenting on mine.

Such a good story

Don’t listen to all the idiots in your comments this story was amazing. Just what I was looking for

Except her legs and hands were bound so how did she stand up or move around etc.

I find the comments to be stupid. Did you check the tags before reading? Or do you just not know what non-con means? It’s a fetish for a lot of people so if you don’t like then guess what? Then don’t read a story with that tag. It’s that easy smh people these days

she will make a great mother for her stepbrother's children