All Comments on 'A Surprising Sunday Service'

Totally unrealistic, but who cares: it's fiction!

superb writing

I can't remember the last time I have laughed this hard at anything I've read.Please keep writing you truely have a talent for humor. Please give us more!

Funny, hot, irreverent and refreshingly different. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Maybe not plausible, but not impossible. I have two adventures from my younger days with two different girls in church. One during a weekday, when the building was nearly empty. The other was during a Sunday morning service, as she gave me a BJ in the room with the audio/video controls. This tale brought back from memories. Thanks!

With my years as a child in Catholic school, church, and the utter hypocrisy of it all, I loved this story. Well done, well written! Thanks for all your hard work, keep them cumming !

Nicely done...keep writting..thank you

Okay, not highly plausible but not entirely impossible either. I loved it: hot sex with a hottie in church - what's not to like?! (P.S. I have been in my life a boy chorister and later an organ scholar, etc. sadly I've mostly only ever been involved with all-male choirs... which may have been a good thing: I would not have been able to resist a girl like that!)

Great to read a well written story ( or was it? lol ) very plausible keep writing. It was so refreshing to have an original plot

Sequal please

One of the best stories I've every read. P.S. Organized religion is such a hoax.

This is a funny story with a witty teen girl character. Very interesting and different.

Fantastic writing.

But there was no buildup to the sex. Could have been better.

And you wrote STAUNCH when you meant STANCH.

What an incredible day for Mike.....ha ha

Every man's dream.

Great story.

Excellent story. The writing is good and clever in places; the pace is great. You tell just enough and not too much. The tone has just the right level of lightness. There's just enough detail to give this deliciously naughty tale plausibility. A very enjoyable story.

I’ve never left comments before but this was the best I’ve ever read. Your are so fucking talented this was astounding. The part with the vibrating pipes?? The description of her body?? The humor mixed perfectly with sex?? No long wait or stupid buildup, no lull in the writing. I’d pay for this. Definitely coming back.

Bravo! Thank you for a well-written, imaginative, hot-as-fuck story. 5 stars. :)

I cam back to reread this story, again, it left me horny as well as well entertained. Funny one!

I sing in the choir.

Wish I had a soloist to join me in the organ loft. I would never miss.

AWESOME sex

Can’t wait to hear Becca’s next solo with Mike’s accompanying help.

Hot fun loved the setting.

GAWD...what a hot first time for the 2 of them...the picture you paint...! So lucky she'd been training herself with her dildos to allow her sphincter to yield...

Becca going commando under her choir robe....

Five really not enough...going into all-time greats folder...well done!

Incredibly sexy arse-fucking scenario. Please write more about this duo including sleepovers, babysitting opportunities and more sodomy on Sundays at church! Religion never felt so great!

So very different and so hot, Great story, young girl naked under her robes, so hot, what a great story.10/10, I am so wet😋

As an author myself, who tries (like you) to craft pieces of art rather than dirty stories, I can tell you that this one is worth far more than the score it has earned so far. There must be a bunch of people out there who really don’t appreciate talent. And you have it, my friend! I seldom read an author’s entire library but I’m working through yours and I love it. This one - and the sequel - is the best, though, so when you finally get back to writing you know where to start! Thank you for your creative ability and please, come back and write some more!! Hot_Sister.

One of, if not the best, I have ever read. Thank you, thank you, thank you,. Awaiting more, hopefully!

Good premise.

Rush to cock in ass much too rapid.

Needed much more touching/teasing/playing/fingering before cock into ass.

Maybe some rimming to show how much he enjoyed her asshole. And for lubrication.

Four stars.

Well done. Now my caveats.

1. Sexually assertive woman, passive male puts moral responsibility on the woman. Just the way men like it. Their sexual needs met, their dream of releasing their passion without responsibility…. It is cliche here at Literotica. I suppose rape fantasies are the correlate for women.

How about hot erotica where both have equal agency?