All Comments on 'Carrots Ch. 07'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

loved it

wish this so hot story was a bit longer, can't wait for more !!!!.

SuckMyPencil almost 7 years agoAuthor

Future bits

There will be more to come, specifically the two girls and Jim

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

as i said before.. each chapter should be 2-5 lit pages long. Also you need to describe all the characters.. You didn't describe sam's body except her coloring and to say shes a snake spliced.

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