by sandspike
make me miss the ocean so badly!! wonderful poem sandspike, totally loved it!!
this poem. I want a beer. Oh, it's only 7 am. Thanks Spike.
sure know the feelings well and you describe the surf and sitting at happy hour listening to reggae...the thunderbirds and twistin that lime....brilliant...blue
make me want a beer, but certainly left me with want of a big boulder facing the ocean to plop my fanny on.
lovely read..i love love love ocean poems!
Actually, sand, this was a better ad for Corona than most of their own work. I like the way you captured the images.
Favorite part is:
Each wave a current event,
each sunset seen through a longneck,
nice flow to it!
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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