All Comments on 'My Best Friend Stacie Ch. 04'

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GrimbrattGrimbrattalmost 7 years ago

I am really enjoying this series. I can't wait for the next chapter. It is well written and believable. Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Where's my insulin?

You keep on bombarding us with sweetness of pure love born out of true friendship, how can one do anything but awe at his and demand more. Sure they are kinky and frisky but that's all part of being young and freshly truly in love, plus added excitement does spice the experience. Judging by how their mom endorses them dating I don't think being caught by her parents would be such a bad thing, sure a reprimand of doing it in plain sight might follow but the joy of them being in item might overweigh it all. Damn I can't wait to read more of those two, hopefully the reveal comes soon!

As usual there are a few mistakes here and there, nothing an editor or a second glance can't fix, but it's still a 5* worthy chapter. Plow on my friend!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
5 Stars

It's definitely 5* worthy, but one suggestion is to make them a bit longer, but besides that that's it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ithis is great!!

Just keep them like this, maybe add an accesental pregnancy to add some drama.

General_OGeneral_Oalmost 7 years ago
More

Love it please keep writing

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Beautiful

Keep the series going.

Sneaky girl, but lovely

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I write for publication and just post here on my free time. I don't seek out editors and everything here is usually written in under an hour. Writing can become a chore when you're doing it for money. This is just a way to put more enjoyment into a hobby

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