by Samuelx
Sound familiar?
Since you started, you can't write! Dear god, someone put you out of our misery!
I thought this was a very good story. Other than a few editing details, the character development was better than a typical lit story and the sex, though not super detailed, had some good visuals and thoughtful emotional components. Don't know why you've attracted such virulent anons in the comments.
Steeves Volmor-Cherenfant, your mother was very upset when I told her about your writing these awful stories again. Not as upset as when you were writing incest stories about your little cousins, but almost as upset. You need to find a new hobby.
Nice story, Samuel X. Please keep up the good work.
And don't spend any of your precious time on the haters...they are simply not worth it.
Kindred Spirit.