All Comments on 'A Supervillain's Domination'

And cut and hacked the tentacles until all that was left was small tentacle pieces.

Laughably bad.

Too short, Good idea for a story. But you should have described the Heroin getting caught in the tentacles. The struggle and removal of her clothes. Taken more time to describe how the tentacles invaded her. Had her put up more resistance until each tentacle added finally after many orgasms and swallowing of the drug finally until she can resist no more. But on a good note the I found the writing flowed nicely and was enjoyable to read. I can see great potential in your writing.