All Comments on 'Final Streak'

Silver Muse, You guess what

I am the first to view and read this mega masterpiece.

So many awesome titillating moments like:

"More fingers slipped over my breast in a rush. A thumb rubbed my nipple to aching hardness and just kept rubbing. A hand cupped my other breast, caressing the sweaty curve."

♡ please more

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for real I've never commented on a story but this story was extremely well written

Great story and very sexy

Extremely well written. How cool you are publishing your work. I wish you would flesh out your bio. So few writers here share their personal details.

Thank you -- five stars.

The soft hair of his chest brushes against her nipples -- how sexy can you be? Matt seems like a very handsome young man! I want some sexy guy's chest hair to brush lightly across my chest too!

Fun story - so hot! The idea is provocative - unexpectedly running into a crush while on a streaking dare. I loved Lara's transition from "trying to avoid being seen" to "up for anything". The line, "you can touch"... mmm!

I love your writing style and that story was so hot! Please keep more stories coming!

Definitely a contender

A great story superbly written. And, unusually for this site, correctly spelt throughout, earning you a sixth star. Thank you.

I would absolutely love more stories about Lara. This was a pleasure to read!

Matt seems sexy as hell and him blushing is the cutest thing ever i need me a Matt

I enjoyed how well written the story was which was in vivid detail. Keep on writing. You did a great job writing this story. You got me aroused just reading it.

You wrote a new one! Yay! So hot.

Really enjoyed reading this, great piece of erotic writing. Keep up the good work.

It is a pleasure reading what you write. It's in vivid detail and written so nicely that I just can't hold back but check if there's anything new every two weeks. I would hope you'd write more often but I understand that maybe this isnt your top priority. Thank you for giving us the pleasure of reading your work and I hope us fans give you motivation to keep writing!

All of your work is absolutely amazing. Probably the best I've read. Please, please keep writing!!

Soooo well written,a really,really fine job!loved it!

Thanks for all the nice comments -- I really appreciate them. You guys definitely motivate me to keep writing!

I'm working on the sequel to "Boys Next Door" right now. It's grown from a short story to a novella to, apparently, a full-blown novel with a whole lot of feelings in the mix. But I do miss posting on Lit. Once the sequel is done, I'll be back with another chapter of "In Your Office."

As always, thank you so much for reading! xo

This was so hot. Great writing. I actually felt good about reading this because it has none of the tropes like "she was shy and blonde with huge tits," no focus on virginity, no calling women sluts. I just really love being able to see myself in this story.

I've got one hell of an exhibition kink, and you've got an amazing story here. I love all the characters and can really FEEL the chemistry between Lara and Matt. As someone else said, I saw myself in the story and I honestly wanted to fuck all of them, eapecially Matt and Lara. Keep it up; this is a CLASSIC.

Omg!! I’ve never bothered to comment before but I made an exception for this story as it was amazing- not too long or too short, it was so hot!!!

fantastic writing. not overly focused on detail, but just enough and done in such a clever way that the characters feel real, which they rarely do in these kinds of stories. masterful

Your descriptions were delicious

And the story very hot

Thank you

Great characterisation and storytelling make this just so good!

Fuck that was hot. Believable. real people enjoying their bodies and sex. So rich and descriptive without being corny.

OMFG your stories... Thank you!

Created an account after many years just to make you a favorite 😍😊😍😊

Best of the comments so far imho:

Hot as fuck!

"You can touch..." What a line.

His soft chest hair brushes against her nipples.

No calling women sluts, no fixation on virginity, none of the body-type tropes.

CLASSIC

Masterful

SO, so much great detail in the steamy af sex scenes. I too think you're masterful (is there a gender-neutral term?) at it. (: Your characters are uniquely genuine, realistic and fun, in a (my) vivid fantasy sex world kind of way. Story is well-paced with no redundancy. Writing is smooth, controlled, confident. Sex scenes are lush, amazing and HOT as juicy, dripping FUCK ! (: Leaves me wanting more. More, please. Don't stop, don't stop... 😎😘😊💗

Well done!

Hot hot hot!!!

Hard to sustain that kind of intensity, but you did!!

Loved it!

There are strange things done during final exams, but this was one of the best stories about finals that I've read. Well done!

I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story.

I loved the story it was so good I wish there was a sequel to it

Super hot! I hope they get together, get married, and have lots of babies!!!

Excellent work. Hot story with likeable characters making a genuine connection and having fun.

I love this story, both for the hotness and for how sweet Matt and Lara are with each other, you can feel the chemistry. Something about this story really did it for me!

Whheewww...!!

LOVED IT...the dialogue, just enough description of the women, and little back stories on each to make them real, all of them voyeurs and Lara the exhibitionist, and finding out Matt had been a long-time fan/admirer, and then the 2 scorching hot shags/Matt's rapid recovery (to be in MY early 20's again...)

not just 5/fave...this going into my All-Time Faves List too, and going back to your bio and stories list -know I've read some of your other work, too...loved all the other uniform comments/compliments-just surprised only 34 of them.

When stupid bitches get together

That was steamy as hell. This one, I'm reading to my wife over coffee. Thank you for the morning wood and crazy thoughts.