All Comments on 'An Ode to Lust Ch. 01'
by troythefucker
- 9 Comments
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoA total plagiarism of Romance of Lust from the Victorian era (full text at horntip.com).
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoWhy do you people continue to create 18, 19 and 20 year old males as if they are 12?
prop69almost 7 years agoCan't wait for Kate and Evelyn to get some use out of his big cock.
Maybe even MOM needs some benefits.
Jagnagalmost 7 years agoI thought this lad was nineteen not bloody 12 !! Your portrayal of him is so imature he sounds bachwards, most kids today have more sexual experience at 14/15 years of age so come 19 he should be a well experienced plus if his dick is that big all the girls would have heard about it and wanted a test drive ...
Story idea was ok but too many difficult words even for me and i'm not daft at all.
The grammer was not so good, could do with an editor and try to stick to normal everyday wording, dont try to be cleverer than you actually are !
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAll this story is, is a plagiarism of Romance of Lust from the Victorian Era just with an incest twist to it
scally21almost 7 years agoGave up midway through page 1. I'm rather hoping that this was some sorry arsed attempt by a 12 year old. Pathetic use of 'ye olde English' and horrendous grammar.
zeakeralmost 7 years agoThis is a great homage to Romance of Lust. Not a rip-off. Three cheers. Five Stars!
Anonymousalmost 7 years ago"The grammer was not so good".
A little like your spelling.
Apart from that, I agree with you, the story was puerile at best.
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