All Comments on 'Clittermouse'

Interesting terminologies - very descriptive and uninhibited!

Enjoyed it.

If a boy doesn't want his mother it's because he wants his aunt. In this case he got both. Very erotic and real.

Difficult to read. A few euphemisms are fine, but to this extent it becomes too distracting and that takes the fun out of what could be a good story. Maybe pick one or two words to mean something like tits or nipples and stick with them and maybe every-now-and-again refer to them by their "real" name.

Sorry, I don't mean to be so critical, but a good story doesn't need all that much window dressing.

Keep writing!

Ted

bodDouble22

I have to say that I like your writing style very much. For the reader, it is of course impossible to separate imagination from memoir but the emotional tone that comes through in the writing is wonderful.