by kerrymcboyd
Once again, your writing is just soooo good. Please don't spoil us by giving us chapters so soon, and then possibly taking a long break. Keep up with the steady updates, and I will forever rate your stories 5 stars Dx Keep them coming.
Just as hot as chapter 1, but way to short in the sex scene, granted It is hot and spontaneous, but, too quick. Put two sex scenes in each chapter to make it not so quick reading and so much wanting for more and now we have too wait for the third! You have a great talent. Keep it (me) up.
Off to a great start. Loved your writing. Both chapters very hot. Can't wait for more.
Very hot! I love the contrast of his anxious thoughts with, once the sex started, Russ' confident control. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Great second chapter but please more sex, more descriptive writing of both cocks and bum cheeks please
Made me very hard
Please keep the Chapters coming...
I very like your way of writing (style and choice of words) and the plot you are creating, which is very hot.
Contrary to my former commentator, I do not need more or longer sex scenes: Keep it simple, stupid.
PS I hope, this is the correct idiom; I am no native english speaker.
Very good story, I'm ready to read the next chapter. Keep writing please.
Lmao why is no talking about how funny this is? It made every feels so natural and real